Wednesday, May 7, 2008
My experience while researching and writing research paper
Exactly, I had a good time more than difficult time when I wrote my research paper because I really want to do this research paper. Therefore, when I faced the difficulties, I did not think that it was a problem. I just solved the problems and did it in a correct way. Now I have known how to write the good research paper even though my research paper this time is not a perfect one. However, I will try to do my best the next time when I have to write the research paper again. I would like to say thank you so much Ms. Azimi because you are a good instructor. You always give me many good suggestions. I think I get successful for my research paper. Although it is not a big success, I am so proud of my attention. This is a basic thing that will lead me to write a great research paper when I study in the university. Moreover, I got a lot of new knowledge while researching and writing my research paper. First time, I thought that I knew a lot about my topic: Benefits of Eating Brown Rice. However, when I searched more information for my research paper, I wondered that there are a lot of things about benefits of brown rice that I did not know before. For example, I have already known that it has more nutritional value than regular rice, and it can help people to control weight because of a lot of fiber that it contains. Also, I have already known that it may help people stay away from some diseases, but I did not know that it has great benefits to protect people from a lot of diseases.
Wednesday, April 9, 2008
Reaction essay

Under Siege
There was a sergeant who killed the captain and brought his member to take over the marine ship of the government. He also arrested a hero who was a cooker in the cooking room before he and his group took over the marine ship. A group of bad guys wanted a lot of money from the government. They contacted and threatened the government. If the government does not pay them a lot of money, they are going to use the missile in order to destroy the city. However, the hero could escape from arrest and contacted with the government. Therefore, the government had a hope to keep both money and the city. The hero released some marines that were arrested and they helped each other to fight with the bad guys. Ultimately, the hero and his group won and all of the bad guys were killed. Also, the hero could destroy the missile that was already released to destroy the city.
I really like this movie because I like action movie. It can make me feel excited when I saw this movie. However, I think that it is a little bit more over action. The hero was shot many times, but he had never gotten the shot. Also, he had never gotten hurt. In contrast, when the hero shot the bad guys, they are going to die or get hurt every time. I have known that a style of action movie is the hero always win and still stay alive at the end. I can guess that what is going on from the beginning. However, I still like to watch the action movie.
Wednesday, March 26, 2008
Report on My Research Experience
My research topic is the benefit of eating brown rice. I should this topic because my major is food technology, so I am interested in food. Even though there are many kinds of food to choose to do the research, I chose to research about brown rice because I think that in the present, people are concerned about their health. Also, I am an Asian that eats rice to be a staple food, so I think that it is important to eat a healthy food every single day. When I researched my topic, I still have not wanted the librarian to help me because I still have not had any problems about how to find the information. I did not mean that I am an expert, and I do not want other people to help me, but the first time when I had a problem, I asked Ms. Azimi. Also, she helped me, so I have known that how I can find the information. Moreover, Ms. Azimi invited the librarian to instruct the students about how to search the information, so I have known about this. However, I think that I will want the librarians to help me in the future, and I think that they will help me as much as they can. In addition, when I researched my topic, I got many rewards. The important thing is I have known that how to find the information on the Internet. This is the most important thing because this can help me when I study in the university and have to find the information for my research. Furthermore, I have gotten more knowledge about brown rice. The first time, I knew that brown rice has a lot of benefit, but I did not know that what exactly benefits it is and how many benefits it has. However, I have known more about this when I have researched my topic. Ultimately, I still have not gotten any frustration because I love to research about this topic. Indeed, I will try to do a great job for my research paper as much as I can. I promise!
Wednesday, March 19, 2008
Comment about Obama Wright's Speech
Obama Wright mentioned about low class and slaves at the first of his speech. I think that he care about people who lack of opportunity. He talked about crime that will happen from low class people. Also, he paid more attention to talk about black and white people. He disagreed with his pastor because the pastor taught people that white people are better than black people. He think that pastors do not have the right to teach people about which race is better than the others. If pastors teach people about this, it can make black people become anger. He said that US problem are neither black nor white nor Latino nor Asian because he wanted to tell the audiences that we should not separate other people by their race. Everyone has the equal right. He thinks that if people are treated different from the others, they will never be able to come together. He said that many black men still lack of opportunity. Many blacks are still treated in different way from white people. I think he believe that if American still think about the race, people in this country will never be happy. In my opinion, he talked about the race because he think that the race have been changed by law for a long time, but in the people’s mind still separate and think about the race.
Wednesday, March 5, 2008
My research paper outline
The Benefit of eating Brown Rice.
Something that makes brown rice more beneficial than white rice are
- more nutrition value
high fiber
high vitamin and mineral
- helps to protect from many diseases
control blood pressure
control cholesterol
keep away from heart disease
prevent from asthma
decrease the risk of diabetes
prevent from colon cancer
prevent from gall stones
- maintain weight
fiber-rich food
reduce constipation
People should eat brown rice instead of white rice for many advantages.
Something that makes brown rice more beneficial than white rice are
- more nutrition value
high fiber
high vitamin and mineral
- helps to protect from many diseases
control blood pressure
control cholesterol
keep away from heart disease
prevent from asthma
decrease the risk of diabetes
prevent from colon cancer
prevent from gall stones
- maintain weight
fiber-rich food
reduce constipation
People should eat brown rice instead of white rice for many advantages.
Wednesday, February 27, 2008
My Opinion about Pakistan Causes Worldwide YouTube Outage
In the present, the problems from the Internet affect many people in the world because the world in the present is a global network. Most people use the Internet to communicate each other and find some information. Also, many people use the Internet to pay their bill. If there are some problem happened to the Internet, it can hurt people. For example, if the Internet out of order, people who want to pay bill immediately will hurt because they cannot do that. Also, they might be charged for extra money because they pay lately. Although, the Internet sometimes affects a big problem, people still prefer using this high technology in many ways. Therefore, the communication companies should try to fix the problems that may happen to the Internet. Moreover, I have some opinions about some topics should be banned on the Internet including all of the communicating ways. I think that people who release some topic to the public should be concerned that it is suitable to public that or not because it may hurt or affect others. Also, it is good that the government and all of communication companies mention watching and having the rule to protect people from the unsuitable topic. People should deny accepting the bad information, but people sometimes don’t know that the information is good or bad. Therefore, the communication companies are responsible for releasing all of the information. It is important for everyone to respect others’ right. People should not take the right or hurt others for their advantages. It is certain that not only government and the communication companies but also everyone should worry about publishing the unsuitable information.
Wednesday, February 20, 2008
Meaning of friend
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Advanced Composition Section 3
February 20,2008
A friend is a person who has main three characteristics. Friend has important role to the most people. Each other may have different ideas about friend. However, in my opinion friend should has main three characteristics. First, friend should understand each other. Friend is who you can talk everything. You are going to feel comfortable and happy when you talk with your friend. You sometime have humor inside with each other. Humor inside is something that you and your friend know, but other people don't know. When you say something, your friend gets it and feels funny. However, other people don't understand what you meant. Second, friend should has the honesty. It is an important thing that friend should has it. This characteristic has quite close relation with the first characteristic. You can talk everything to your friend and feel comfortable every time because you trust in your friend. The reasons are the friend don't lie each other, don't cheating, and don't fake. Friend has to say the truth. If you know later on that your friend lies you, next time you cannot believe when your friend say something. Also, you don't want to talk with people that lie you any more. Besides don't lie, to keep secrets is another thing that friend should do it. When you trust someone, you want to say anything with them that sometime you don't want other to know. That is why friend should keep secret. Finally, friend should help each other. When you get trouble, you want someone to help. Also, friend is who you think and want him or her to help you. You can know each other more when you have a problem. Since real friends always want to help you everything and everyway that they can. Helping each other is sometime just talk and advice some ideas. That is enough because when you get a hard time, you cannot think anything. You want someone to tell you that how you should do. Also, you sometime feel bad and want someone to talk together. Friend can talk something that make you feel better. I heard proverb about friend, and I think it is a good idea that I want to tell everyone. "It is easy to find friend for eating, but it is too difficult to find friend for die with us". In summary, a good friend is who has these three characteristics.
Advanced Composition Section 3
February 20,2008
A friend is a person who has main three characteristics. Friend has important role to the most people. Each other may have different ideas about friend. However, in my opinion friend should has main three characteristics. First, friend should understand each other. Friend is who you can talk everything. You are going to feel comfortable and happy when you talk with your friend. You sometime have humor inside with each other. Humor inside is something that you and your friend know, but other people don't know. When you say something, your friend gets it and feels funny. However, other people don't understand what you meant. Second, friend should has the honesty. It is an important thing that friend should has it. This characteristic has quite close relation with the first characteristic. You can talk everything to your friend and feel comfortable every time because you trust in your friend. The reasons are the friend don't lie each other, don't cheating, and don't fake. Friend has to say the truth. If you know later on that your friend lies you, next time you cannot believe when your friend say something. Also, you don't want to talk with people that lie you any more. Besides don't lie, to keep secrets is another thing that friend should do it. When you trust someone, you want to say anything with them that sometime you don't want other to know. That is why friend should keep secret. Finally, friend should help each other. When you get trouble, you want someone to help. Also, friend is who you think and want him or her to help you. You can know each other more when you have a problem. Since real friends always want to help you everything and everyway that they can. Helping each other is sometime just talk and advice some ideas. That is enough because when you get a hard time, you cannot think anything. You want someone to tell you that how you should do. Also, you sometime feel bad and want someone to talk together. Friend can talk something that make you feel better. I heard proverb about friend, and I think it is a good idea that I want to tell everyone. "It is easy to find friend for eating, but it is too difficult to find friend for die with us". In summary, a good friend is who has these three characteristics.
Wednesday, February 13, 2008
My perfect love.
My perfect love was my second ex-boyfriend. I cannot say that he was my really perfect love because we already broke up, but I believe that I am going to meet my perfect love in the near future. I really hope so. However, if I have to say about who my perfect love is, I have to say that my second ex-boyfriend was my perfect love that I had ever met because I don't have any boyfriend now. I really like his personality and the way that he treated to me. He is a very kind person. He is a gentleman. He is very polite, and he always took care of me. He called me every single day. When I got sick, he brought me to the hospital and waited for me until I met and talked to a doctor. He picked me up to school and dropped me off to home everyday when he still is my boyfriend. I really appreciate about this because his home is so far away from my home, but he came to take care of me everyday. He used to wait for me for an hour when we had appointment, but I did not come on time. Also, he has never complained about this, and he could wait for me when I had something to do and it took so long time. However, there was something that it made me to break up with him. I knew that he liked me and really cared of me, but he also liked other women too. Also, I can't stand about this. I talked to him about this before we broke up. He told me that it is very simple for guy to have other women, but I am his real one. He told me that I don't have to care about this because he loves me more than other. I think this was so weird. I told him that I don't want to be the first one, but I want to be only one. Therefore, we broke up. He still sent the flower to me in Valentine day last year after we broke up because he wanted to return again. However, I don't want to do that. I think it is enough between me and him. Although I don't have any boyfriend to celebrate with in this Valentine day, I am happy to celebrate Valentine day with my friend.
My perfect love was my second ex-boyfriend. I cannot say that he was my really perfect love because we already broke up, but I believe that I am going to meet my perfect love in the near future. I really hope so. However, if I have to say about who my perfect love is, I have to say that my second ex-boyfriend was my perfect love that I had ever met because I don't have any boyfriend now. I really like his personality and the way that he treated to me. He is a very kind person. He is a gentleman. He is very polite, and he always took care of me. He called me every single day. When I got sick, he brought me to the hospital and waited for me until I met and talked to a doctor. He picked me up to school and dropped me off to home everyday when he still is my boyfriend. I really appreciate about this because his home is so far away from my home, but he came to take care of me everyday. He used to wait for me for an hour when we had appointment, but I did not come on time. Also, he has never complained about this, and he could wait for me when I had something to do and it took so long time. However, there was something that it made me to break up with him. I knew that he liked me and really cared of me, but he also liked other women too. Also, I can't stand about this. I talked to him about this before we broke up. He told me that it is very simple for guy to have other women, but I am his real one. He told me that I don't have to care about this because he loves me more than other. I think this was so weird. I told him that I don't want to be the first one, but I want to be only one. Therefore, we broke up. He still sent the flower to me in Valentine day last year after we broke up because he wanted to return again. However, I don't want to do that. I think it is enough between me and him. Although I don't have any boyfriend to celebrate with in this Valentine day, I am happy to celebrate Valentine day with my friend.
Wednesday, February 6, 2008
Daily Titan Comment
This article is very interesting and helpful for every student who enter to the college. There are three strategies that help students to cope the problems and survive in college under the circumstances. These include time management, goal setting and art of mastery. If the students use these strategies, I think that they can survive in college. I already graduated Bachelor degree in my country, and nobody or any article told me about how to survive in university. However, I learned to cope the problems by myself because the situations compelled me to survive in university and I had to do a good job. Since I am an only child, and my parents really want me to succeed in my life. In my opinion, I agree with this article about the first year in university. Freshmen usually have more problem about how to survive in college than other because they are not familair to college. They just went over from high school. They have to adjust themselves. Also, I believe that if the students can cope the problems very well in first year, they will succeed and do a great job in college. In my experience,the students may face the problems again when they are senior because they have to do a project or some job that usually not easy for finishing their college. I got very stress when I was senior because I will graduate or not depend on this year.
This article is very interesting and helpful for every student who enter to the college. There are three strategies that help students to cope the problems and survive in college under the circumstances. These include time management, goal setting and art of mastery. If the students use these strategies, I think that they can survive in college. I already graduated Bachelor degree in my country, and nobody or any article told me about how to survive in university. However, I learned to cope the problems by myself because the situations compelled me to survive in university and I had to do a good job. Since I am an only child, and my parents really want me to succeed in my life. In my opinion, I agree with this article about the first year in university. Freshmen usually have more problem about how to survive in college than other because they are not familair to college. They just went over from high school. They have to adjust themselves. Also, I believe that if the students can cope the problems very well in first year, they will succeed and do a great job in college. In my experience,the students may face the problems again when they are senior because they have to do a project or some job that usually not easy for finishing their college. I got very stress when I was senior because I will graduate or not depend on this year.
Monday, December 3, 2007
My assay (First Draft)
Three Reasons to Take A Bus
Transportation is an important thing that people often think about. Everyone needs transportation. Some people have to go to work, and some people have to go to school. Even if someone does not work or study, they still have places that they need to go. These days, there are many ways to get around such as bus, train, bicycle, car, and so on. Some people think about convenience, but some people are concerned about money. Taking a bus is the one choice that a lot of people choose. There are three reasons to take a bus. These include saving money, saving time, and saving the environment.
The first reason to take a bus is saving money. The most important thing why taking a bus save money is people who take a bus don’t have to purchase the car and maintenance. They don’t need to buy the car and don’t need to pay a lot of money to take care their car. For example, drivers sometimes have to bring their car to check the machine, and they have to pay for service. Also, drivers have to pay when they bring their car to wash. Moreover, people who take a bus don’t have to pay their money for gas and parking permit. They pay only fare that is cheaper than gas and parking permit. Besides gas and parking permit, insurance is the cost that drivers have to pay. Furthermore, many people suffer from ticket. People sometimes do something illegal when they drive. For instance, some people sometimes hurry to go and ignore to notice stop sign. Some drivers too busy and don’t see stop sign or other sign, so they do not follow the traffic law. Therefore, they usually get the ticket from the police. Also, cost of ticket is quite expensive. Due to above reasons people who take a bus don’t have to spend a lot of money for many things.
The second reason to take a bus is saving time. People who take a bus don’t have to waste their time finding parking. Although people who drive reach their place faster than people who take a bus, they have to find parking. Drivers sometimes have to spend a lot of time finding parking especially in business hour. They may need time more than people who take a bus. There is a good example for this case. Some drivers have to wake up early in the morning. They have to work at 8.00 am, but they cannot go to work almost 8.00 am because they cannot find parking at that time. Therefore, they have to arrive their work around 7.00 am to 7.30 am because that time is easy to find parking. On the other hand, people who take a bus can go to work almost 8.00 am because when they get off the bus, they can walk to work immediately. Also, people who take a bus will not get lost. Drivers may waste their time for finding the correct way. For example, Drivers sometimes may drive to the wrong way because they think about other things when they drive, or they have to go to the new way that they have never gone before. When they go to the wrong way, they have to spend time finding the right way. In contrast, people who take a bus are not going to face this problem. Moreover, taking a bus help to reduce traffic jam. If everyone drives, there are a lot of cars on the road. Certainly, everybody will face the terrible traffic and has to spend more time on their way.
The final reason to take a bus is saving the environment. Taking a bus can help community to save for environmental pollution. It helps to decrease smog. When people drive, the cars will release carbon dioxide that affect global warming. Also, global warming can cause many problems. Furthermore, taking a bus stop wasting gas. If people drive, they have to use gas for their car. Therefore, people who take a bus do not need to use gas for car. It can save oil because gasoline is produced from oil. In addition, if many people take a bus, they are going to need fewer roads and freeways. The government does not have to build the huge roads and freeways, so they don’t have to cut many trees. Therefore, people who take a bus can help their country to save a lot of trees. Clearly, taking a bus can save the environment for many reasons.
In conclusion, there are many good reasons to take a bus. Some people care about their money. Some people do not want to waste their time finding parking. Also, people sometimes take a bus because they do not know the way exactly, and they do not want to go to the wrong way because they do not want to spend a lot of time going back to the right way. Someone think that taking a bus can help to reduce the problem about a lot of traffic jam because they do not want to spend more time on the road. A lot of people really care about environmental problem. They don’t want to be a person who causes a lot of pollution. They know that a lot of cars can make a lot of pollution. They do not want to use gas because they want to save oil. Also, they do not want the huge roads and freeways because they do not want to destroy many trees. Taking a bus has many advantages. It can help not only people but also environment. Therefore, taking a bus is a better way for many reasons.
Transportation is an important thing that people often think about. Everyone needs transportation. Some people have to go to work, and some people have to go to school. Even if someone does not work or study, they still have places that they need to go. These days, there are many ways to get around such as bus, train, bicycle, car, and so on. Some people think about convenience, but some people are concerned about money. Taking a bus is the one choice that a lot of people choose. There are three reasons to take a bus. These include saving money, saving time, and saving the environment.
The first reason to take a bus is saving money. The most important thing why taking a bus save money is people who take a bus don’t have to purchase the car and maintenance. They don’t need to buy the car and don’t need to pay a lot of money to take care their car. For example, drivers sometimes have to bring their car to check the machine, and they have to pay for service. Also, drivers have to pay when they bring their car to wash. Moreover, people who take a bus don’t have to pay their money for gas and parking permit. They pay only fare that is cheaper than gas and parking permit. Besides gas and parking permit, insurance is the cost that drivers have to pay. Furthermore, many people suffer from ticket. People sometimes do something illegal when they drive. For instance, some people sometimes hurry to go and ignore to notice stop sign. Some drivers too busy and don’t see stop sign or other sign, so they do not follow the traffic law. Therefore, they usually get the ticket from the police. Also, cost of ticket is quite expensive. Due to above reasons people who take a bus don’t have to spend a lot of money for many things.
The second reason to take a bus is saving time. People who take a bus don’t have to waste their time finding parking. Although people who drive reach their place faster than people who take a bus, they have to find parking. Drivers sometimes have to spend a lot of time finding parking especially in business hour. They may need time more than people who take a bus. There is a good example for this case. Some drivers have to wake up early in the morning. They have to work at 8.00 am, but they cannot go to work almost 8.00 am because they cannot find parking at that time. Therefore, they have to arrive their work around 7.00 am to 7.30 am because that time is easy to find parking. On the other hand, people who take a bus can go to work almost 8.00 am because when they get off the bus, they can walk to work immediately. Also, people who take a bus will not get lost. Drivers may waste their time for finding the correct way. For example, Drivers sometimes may drive to the wrong way because they think about other things when they drive, or they have to go to the new way that they have never gone before. When they go to the wrong way, they have to spend time finding the right way. In contrast, people who take a bus are not going to face this problem. Moreover, taking a bus help to reduce traffic jam. If everyone drives, there are a lot of cars on the road. Certainly, everybody will face the terrible traffic and has to spend more time on their way.
The final reason to take a bus is saving the environment. Taking a bus can help community to save for environmental pollution. It helps to decrease smog. When people drive, the cars will release carbon dioxide that affect global warming. Also, global warming can cause many problems. Furthermore, taking a bus stop wasting gas. If people drive, they have to use gas for their car. Therefore, people who take a bus do not need to use gas for car. It can save oil because gasoline is produced from oil. In addition, if many people take a bus, they are going to need fewer roads and freeways. The government does not have to build the huge roads and freeways, so they don’t have to cut many trees. Therefore, people who take a bus can help their country to save a lot of trees. Clearly, taking a bus can save the environment for many reasons.
In conclusion, there are many good reasons to take a bus. Some people care about their money. Some people do not want to waste their time finding parking. Also, people sometimes take a bus because they do not know the way exactly, and they do not want to go to the wrong way because they do not want to spend a lot of time going back to the right way. Someone think that taking a bus can help to reduce the problem about a lot of traffic jam because they do not want to spend more time on the road. A lot of people really care about environmental problem. They don’t want to be a person who causes a lot of pollution. They know that a lot of cars can make a lot of pollution. They do not want to use gas because they want to save oil. Also, they do not want the huge roads and freeways because they do not want to destroy many trees. Taking a bus has many advantages. It can help not only people but also environment. Therefore, taking a bus is a better way for many reasons.
Tuesday, November 27, 2007
Introduction Assay
Three Reasons to Take A Bus
Transportation is an important thing that people often think about. Everyone needs transportation. Some people have to go to work, and some people have to go to school. Even if someone does not work or study, they still have places that they need to go. These days, there are many ways to get around such as bus, train, bike, car, and so on. Some people think about convenience, but some people are concerned about money. Taking a bus is the one choice that a lot of people choose. There are three reasons to take a bus. These include saving money, saving time, and saving the environment.
Transportation is an important thing that people often think about. Everyone needs transportation. Some people have to go to work, and some people have to go to school. Even if someone does not work or study, they still have places that they need to go. These days, there are many ways to get around such as bus, train, bike, car, and so on. Some people think about convenience, but some people are concerned about money. Taking a bus is the one choice that a lot of people choose. There are three reasons to take a bus. These include saving money, saving time, and saving the environment.
Wednesday, November 7, 2007
Journal Entry #33
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Composition 4C
November 10, 2007
What are you going to do over the 3 day weekend?
The Three Days Weekend.
There is nothing special that I am going to do over the 3 days weekend. I don't think about this weekend, so I still don't have plan to do anything. However, when I knew that I have to write journal about what am I going to do this weekend, I just though about this. Now I have a little bit plan, but it is quite boring. The first day of weekend, I am going to finish my homework that I think I have to do it all day because I have a lot of homework. Many teachers like to give students too much homework in long weekend except my composition teacher. He always wants students write three journals every week although we don't have long weekend. If I can finish my homework on this Saturday, I can do other things on other days. The second day of weekend, I am going to do chores around the house such as washing the dishes, washing my clothes, cleaning bathroom, and so on. Since I live with my aunt, I have to help her to do chores. If I live with my parents now, I will not worry about this. I can ignore it. The last day of weekend, I will go to the mall. I just want to look some clothes. I am not going to buy anything because I knew that every mall will give the customers a big discount when the day after Thanksgiving. Therefore, I will wait until that day. However, I want to go to the mall this weekend because someone told me that on Thanksgiving many people are going to go to the mall early in the morning. When the mall open, a lot of people will hurry to go inside and take every thing that they like as quick as possible. I may don't have enough time looking for something. I will go to the mall before that day, and I will decide my mind that what I want. Also, I will try to wear the clothes that I like because I have to know that it is look good for me or not, and I have to know the size that suitable for me. Therefore, I can go to the mall on Thanksgiving, and I can take everything that I want quickly because I already knew what I want. In conclusion, I have three main things to do on this weekend even though it is not so exciting.
Composition 4C
November 10, 2007
What are you going to do over the 3 day weekend?
The Three Days Weekend.
There is nothing special that I am going to do over the 3 days weekend. I don't think about this weekend, so I still don't have plan to do anything. However, when I knew that I have to write journal about what am I going to do this weekend, I just though about this. Now I have a little bit plan, but it is quite boring. The first day of weekend, I am going to finish my homework that I think I have to do it all day because I have a lot of homework. Many teachers like to give students too much homework in long weekend except my composition teacher. He always wants students write three journals every week although we don't have long weekend. If I can finish my homework on this Saturday, I can do other things on other days. The second day of weekend, I am going to do chores around the house such as washing the dishes, washing my clothes, cleaning bathroom, and so on. Since I live with my aunt, I have to help her to do chores. If I live with my parents now, I will not worry about this. I can ignore it. The last day of weekend, I will go to the mall. I just want to look some clothes. I am not going to buy anything because I knew that every mall will give the customers a big discount when the day after Thanksgiving. Therefore, I will wait until that day. However, I want to go to the mall this weekend because someone told me that on Thanksgiving many people are going to go to the mall early in the morning. When the mall open, a lot of people will hurry to go inside and take every thing that they like as quick as possible. I may don't have enough time looking for something. I will go to the mall before that day, and I will decide my mind that what I want. Also, I will try to wear the clothes that I like because I have to know that it is look good for me or not, and I have to know the size that suitable for me. Therefore, I can go to the mall on Thanksgiving, and I can take everything that I want quickly because I already knew what I want. In conclusion, I have three main things to do on this weekend even though it is not so exciting.
Tuesday, November 6, 2007
Journal Entry #32
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Composition 4C
November 11, 2007
Thanksgiving is coming up soon. What three things are you most thankful for?
Thanksgiving
There are three things that I most thankful for. First, I would like to thank for my parents. My parents are the first people who I really want to thank. They always give me everything that I want or necessary for me. They give me not only things, but also knowledge. Moreover, the most important thing that they always give me is love. Also, I could not come to the United Stated and have studied at ALP if I don't have my parents support. Although I have to write three journals every week, I still feel happy that my parents support me to study at ALP. Second, I really want to thank for my aunt who I stay in her home now. She is a person who recommends me to study at ALP. When I lived in my country, and I want to study English language at the US, I called my aunt to find the university for me. Also, she went to the ALP office, and she sent some information about ALP to me in Thailand. Furthermore, she has permitted me to stay at her home during I am studying here. Even though I have to pay for her, it is cheaper than rent an apartment. Also, it is more comfortable than live in apartment. Finally, I would like to thank for my destiny. It makes me to meet many good things and many good experiences in my life. Though I sometimes have a problem, I usually can deal with it. Therefore, I like to say that thank you so much my destiny. It usually makes me decide my mind and correct the problem in the right way. I can face every problem because I believe in my destiny. In addition, my destiny makes me to study at ALP and meet my nice classmates and very kind teachers. Also, I have to write three journals every week because my destiny makes me to study here and meet composition teacher who like to assign the students to write the journals. Furthermore, my destiny makes me to have the person who I really want to say thank you. I have great parents because my good luck destiny. Also, it makes my aunt to recommend me to study here. To summarize, due to thanksgiving is coming up soon, I would like to say thank you for the most three important things that make me success in my life.
Journal Entry #31
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Composition 4C
November 11, 2007
Is it ever okay to lie? In which circumstances?
Is It Okay to Lie?
It is okay to lie in some reasons. First, lie to save other feeling. We sometimes have to lie because we don't want other to worry about us. Also, we don't want to hurt other. Therefore, we sometimes should not tell the truth. For example, when we don't live with our parents, we usually call them. Also, when we call them, they usually like to ask us about our health. We should tell them that we are fine although we sometimes really get sick because we don't want they to worry. Second, Lie to help ourselves. We are not selfish, but we lie because we don't want to get some troubles. We want to avoid from the problems. However, we should make sure that we don't hurt other or make other to get some bad effect because we lie. For instance, we sometimes come to class late. We often tell the teacher that we face a lot of traffic jam even though we oversleep. Since we don't want to have a problem. However, we can lie to help ourselves, but it is going to be okay in sometime not several times. We should improve ourselves. Therefore, we don't need to lie about this problem again. Finally, lie to help other. We really care about other, so we sometimes lie to help them. For example, when our friend absent, we usually tell the teacher that they get sick, or they have the important thing to do. However, this kind of lie is not good in some situations because we may help people who make guilty become guiltlessness. Moreover, they may make same guilty again because they don't get any punishment. If we lie to help other that do in wrong way, we should tell them that don't do it again. Also, we should not lie to help them become guiltlessness more than one time. Indeed, there are many situations that no problem to lie.
Thursday, November 1, 2007
Journal Entry #30
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Composition 4C
November 4, 2007
Does it matter what strangers think of you? Do you care if everyone likes you or are you content just being yourself? Write a paragraph explaining your answer.
It does not a matter what strangers think of me because they are just strangers. I don't know they, and they don't know me too. Therefore, I don't care what they think of me. I content just being myself. When I think that I do in correct way, it does not a matter if someone doesn't like me. If I care about everyone likes me or not, I have to pretend to do something that it is not my behavior. That is mean I fake. Moreover, I think that I cannot make everyone likes me. Since, everyone has many opinions and ideas. Also, everyone has many styles. When I do something, someone may like it. However, someone may don't like it anymore. If I care about strangers, I am going to be nervous. I feel happy to be myself. If strangers like me, it is good. If they don't like me, it is not a problem. I am not a egoist, but I am so proud of myself. I am not mean, but I don't want to change my behavior or my style for strangers. However, I care about my parents and my friends. If they don't like me, I am going to feel sad. Also, I will adapt myself for my parents and my friends. In conclusion, I like to be myself, and I don't care about strangers. However, I am going to do everything to be the best.
Wednesday, October 31, 2007
Journal Entry #29
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Dung Do
Eun Sup Lee (Kenny)
Hyerang Sim (Kaitlyn)
10/24/07
Composition 4C
A Dancer
One full moon night in the rainy season, a man who lived in an apartment on the 13th floor felt alone and bored. His apartment had lost electricity because of the thunderstorm. Therefore, he held a candle in his hand and then put it on the table. Suddenly, the window was opened by the wind. Then he tried to close the window. At that moment, he looked at the opposite building, and he saw a woman who was dancing. However, he couldn’t see her clearly because there was the heavy rain. Strangely, he didn’t see her again until the next full moon, and she was still dancing. She wore a white dress, and she danced like a butterfly. He fell in love with her and really wanted to meet her. In the next morning, he went to her apartment, but no one answered the door. Next time when he saw her in full moon night again, he ran to her apartment immediately. He knocked on the door, and he waited for her. A few minutes later, he knocked again, and the door opened slowly. He went inside slowly and saw a dirty room with old furniture and many spider webs. The room smelled disgusting. When he walked into the room where she was dancing, he couldn’t believe his eyes. There was an empty room except for a noose swinging back and forth by the wind.
Dung Do
Eun Sup Lee (Kenny)
Hyerang Sim (Kaitlyn)
10/24/07
Composition 4C
A Dancer
One full moon night in the rainy season, a man who lived in an apartment on the 13th floor felt alone and bored. His apartment had lost electricity because of the thunderstorm. Therefore, he held a candle in his hand and then put it on the table. Suddenly, the window was opened by the wind. Then he tried to close the window. At that moment, he looked at the opposite building, and he saw a woman who was dancing. However, he couldn’t see her clearly because there was the heavy rain. Strangely, he didn’t see her again until the next full moon, and she was still dancing. She wore a white dress, and she danced like a butterfly. He fell in love with her and really wanted to meet her. In the next morning, he went to her apartment, but no one answered the door. Next time when he saw her in full moon night again, he ran to her apartment immediately. He knocked on the door, and he waited for her. A few minutes later, he knocked again, and the door opened slowly. He went inside slowly and saw a dirty room with old furniture and many spider webs. The room smelled disgusting. When he walked into the room where she was dancing, he couldn’t believe his eyes. There was an empty room except for a noose swinging back and forth by the wind.
Monday, October 29, 2007
Journal Entry #28
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Composition 4C
November 4, 2007
Please post your pictures from the ALP Halloween party. Summarize the night and tell me what I missed!
ALP Halloween Party
On ALP Halloween party night, many ALP students came to party and wore the costume. Besides ALP students, ALP staffs and teachers came to party too. The party started 8.00 pm and finished at midnight. Somebody liked to wear a ghostly costume, but somebody liked to look great. Therefore, they wore a beautiful costume such as princely costume, angelic costume. ALP provided some foods for students. There are many kinds of food that we can chose for eating, e.g., California roll, sandwiches, spring roll, cookies, and soda. This party was dancing party, so most people spent more time dancing. I went there a little bit late about 8.45 pm because I waited for my friend. When I arrived there, the first what I did was eating. After that, I talked to my classmate and took a picture together. After that, I and my friends danced, but I danced a little bit. I could not join the party until midnight because I had to go back home with my friend. Also, my friend wanted to go back home about 11.00 pm. Therefore, I didn't know what happened after I went back. However, I can tell you that what you missed. First, you missed to have free dinner. This was the most important thing that you missed. Second, you missed to dance with your intelligent student. Third, you missed to see your student wore scary costume. You can see the pictures, but they are just the pictures. They are not the real. Finally, you missed to face the great atmosphere on that day. Indeed, you missed a lot of things, but you should feel sad a little bit not too much because you have a chance to go to Halloween party next year. Don't miss Halloween party next year!!!
Sunday, October 28, 2007
Journal Entry #27
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Composition 4C
October 28, 2007
I am going to Las Vegas this weekend. If you were going to Las Vegas, where would you go and what would you do? Lastly, do you have any suggestions on how I can win a lot of money? Which games do you like to play?
Activities in Las Vegas
If I have a chance to go to Las Vagas, I will see some shows at night. I heard that Las Vegas is the best entertainment place of USA. I want to see broadway shows, magic shows, and sexy dancers. Also, I want to go to casino. Since I haven't gone there before, and I want to gamble. Also, I want to play with my destiny. I really want to know that I can win a game or absolutely lose. I believe that I am lucky in game. I cannot tell you how to win a lot of money because I don't have any experience about this. However, I would like to tell you that you should not trick because every casino has many security cameras. They will know that you are tricking. There were many people try to trick, but they were punished. You can win a lot of money or not depend on your destiny. However, I can suggest you one thing. If you want to go to casino, you should bring a lot of money. I am pretty sure that you have to use it. If you are married, you should tell your couple before because you may lose a lot of money, and you want to stay there all day and all night. Another suggestion, you can go to see the witch and ask her that you will get or lose a lot of money. After that, you can decide your mind that you want to go to casino or not. However, if I go there, I would like to play slot machine. Since slot machine is easy to play. I don't have to think a lot when I play slot machine. I just put the coin and push. If I play other games such as blackjack and poker, I have to think a lot that how I can win. It can make me nervous. Besides easy to play, slot machine also give me the result so fast. When you play slot machine, you will know the result immediate after you put the coins and push. Lastly, there are many interesting places that you can go in Las Vegas. Also, there are many activities that you can do besides go to casino and play games.
Journal Entry #26
Supisa Somto (Peach)
Composition 4C
October 28, 2007
Compare and contrast two sports.
The Similarities and Differences of Basketball and Soccer
Although basketball and soccer are similar in many ways, there are quite a few differences. There are four similarities between these two sports. First similarity is team work. Both basketball and soccer are sports that have to play by team. They cannot play these two sports by only one person. Also, they have to form a good team and each coach's tactic. They have to plan for team arrangement and playing style. The second similarity is how to make score to be more than the competitor to win. They have to bring the ball into the opposite goal for making score. The third way of similarity is to swap the playing area as there are two parts of in the field. When they play soccer, they have to change the playing area after the first half break. Also, they have to swap the playing area of ball court after the first half break is finished when they play basketball too. Finally, both sports can replace the player. Coach can replace the player during the game if they think that the game tactic should be changed, or coach think that another player is better in that situation. Besides many similarities, there are four differences way between basketball and soccer. The first difference is the place for playing. They have to play the soccer outdoor, whereas the basketball is almost played indoor. Second, the numbers of player in team are totally different between these two sports. They need eleven players for playing soccer. In contrast, the basketball needs only five players. Third, there are quite difference in method to play. They use only feet for playing soccer, while they have to use only hands for playing basketball. Finally, soccer has a goal keeper to protect the goal, but basketball don't have goal keeper. In conclusion, these two sports have both many similarities and differences ways to play. However, not only soccer but also basketball are good for health.
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